Hi! My name is Maria and I’m 16 years old.
Now I’m going to talk about what I did during the summer holidays.
At the begining of the summer I started to work in a summer school. On the first day I felt a little lost because I didn’t know which group I would be in, but I was lucky because I was with my older cousin.
I was with the small children (3 – 4 years old) and they were very loving and friendly. I was with them for 2 months but only in the morning.
As the children were so small we didn’t do a lot of things because they were tired an got bored very quickly, you know.
They did a lot of different things for example: They played games in the yard, they went to the parks, they draw and painted and they went to the swimming-pool and the beach.
We had to watch them carefully because there were 35 children and they could have hurt themselves.
When I finished work, in the afternoon, I went to the beach with my friends, I went to shopping etc. Some nigths I also went to parties or discos depending on the day.
But later, in the middle of the summer everything changed because my grandmother became ill and I visit her when I could but I couldn’t go out so much.
All my friends helped me a lot.
Working with the little children also helped me because we did a lot of things: we went on trips and also to a camp for 2 days, it was very hard for all the monitors with all the children.
We had to help them so much because they were so little. We had to dress them, help them have a shower and sometimes help them to eat. However, the worst was at night because most of them cried.
I had a good time but I wanted to get home. I was so tired.
The summer camp was at the end of the summer, so a week later the summer school finished and I stopped working.
In general, it wasn’t a bad summer.
I enjoyed it and I learnd a lof of new things and I met new friends.
OBSERVATION
I think that my oral presentation was quite good. Because I used a power point, but there weren’t a lot of photos beacuse se didn’t take photos at the summer school. The timing was good because my presentation lasted (X) minutes.
I was quite nervous and sometimes I didn’t look at my audience but I made some gestures or movements that held the attention of my classmates.
The structure of my presentation, was good because my ideas were clear and I organized it in the correct order, in my opinion.
The content was important for me because I talked about what I did during the summer holidays but I don’t know if the people were interested in what I was saying.
I think that my language, in general was correct because I used a varied vocabulary, I used sentence linkers and some pause fillers.
Finally, I think that my pronunciation and intonation could have been better.
To sumarize, even I though it was my first oral presentation. I think it went quite well, but I am sure that I will improve the next time.